Please can any one edit and proofread my stories. I'm useless at punctuation and it's driving me nuts. I read and re-read and re-read, edit my story and still cock it up. I look at how it should be done then my brain writes it differently Yet there is something about your stories that drags this pedant to not notice your mistakes. Curvygalore approved my last story and with it gave me some advice too. Which was great of her. If you want, stick it in a PM and I can give it a once over too. I don't claim to be perfect or even good, but I can promise a fresh set of eyes.
And gone again...is someone trying to tell me to do some work?
Curious the time stamp showed 3:25:08 for me also in the UKPosting this at 17:01 BST...is this a new game :p OK that's curious, because it is showing GMT/UTC whichever you want to call it - 16:01
time stamp shows 4:25:08 PM making it +3 hours BST (+4 hours GMT)so the question remains ... what Time Zone is Lush on ? Curious the time stamp showed 3:25:08 for me also in the UKPosting this at 17:01 BST...is this a new game :p
Well I've got it back again, the hamsters are having a pissy weekend, someone feed them please.
i fixed it. <img src="/images/emoticons/regaeman.gif" alt="Regaeman Man"> You know how to chat someone up...
One benefit of the desktop site being down, I spend more time looking about and found this sub-forum. I have recently finished my 1st multi part story. It is about 37k over 6 parts, following the story of a couple in love when things go a bit awry.Just writing it has been a good learning experience, the to and fro with the mods has taught me more. A great thanks to them and everyone that has taken the time to read, rate and/or commentated.
I have the same problem, no idea what to do. I'm not very good with computers. My understanding is that it is a server side issue, so nothing you can do. I do wonder if anyone is aware as I've not seen any 'we're working on it' notices.
Currently getting this on the main site - Server Error in '/' Application.Runtime ErrorDescription: An exception occurred while processing your request. Additionally, another exception occurred while executing the custom error page for the first exception. The request has been terminated. Home page, mail, profile, probably more.Is this maintenance or are techs aware?Getting it on Android and Chrome and Laptop - Win8 and Firefox
Solved now, thanks to John.
Luke “You okay?” was the first thing Rob asked as I got in the door. He then turned and looked at me and said, “You’re okay. We’ve lost our best support and motivation then?” Grinning I replied, “Support, no, she’ll be coming to our game on Saturday and before you ask, I’ll be at training tomorrow. We’re going out Friday night. Yes, I know, I’ll be a good boy.” “How about Tina? Is...
Added 19 May 2019 | Category Oral Sex
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Luke Sunday morning was always my day for getting breakfast. I had frying pans on three rings: a dozen eggs in one, bacon and sausages in another, mushrooms and onions in the third. Finally, I had a couple of tins of beans cooking in the saucepan. The grill was full with bread being toasted and four mugs of coffee were ready. “Aww, Luke, I love you man, please marry me.” This was Andy,...
Added 15 May 2019 | Category Love Stories
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Luke My first year at university was a mix of crazy, hard work and realising maybe I wasn’t quite as good at rugby as I had thought. That first day was weird, fear of being away from home and excitement about being away from home. Mum and dad gave me a hug and kiss along with the usual, ‘be good, don’t do anything I wouldn’t do,’ and such. My sister hugged me, which was unusual and...
Added 13 May 2019 | Category Love Stories
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What the fuck! I was on the phone to Tina while I was running back to my office. “Tina, where are you and what have you done so far?” “Sat in the car in the car park. I sent you the text, nothing else yet,” I could hear the shake in her voice, I only hoped she couldn’t hear it in mine. “Take a breath and remain calm, we talked about this, just follow the plan, I can be at the hotel in...
Added 02 May 2019 | Category Reluctance
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Tina looked at me imploringly, I hugged her close to me and whispered, “I hope you haven’t forgotten already that you’re mine.” “No, sweetheart, of course not, but…” she trailed off. “What do we do? We speak to Diane and James; shall we invite them for Sunday lunch?” Tina nodded. “My instinct now is to sue both the venue and the stripper company, even if it’s for one pound, just to get an...
Added 01 May 2019 | Category Straight Sex
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I was beside Tina like a rocket, scooping her into my arms, Diane was behind her looking both concerned and nervous. I nodded for her to come, she waved at someone outside and closed the door behind her. Carrying Tina into the front room I asked if she wanted a drink. Through her sniffles she said, “A hot chocolate please,” I looked at Diane who just nodded and disappeared into the kitchen....
Added 28 Apr 2019 | Category Straight Sex
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I rolled over to snuggle against Tina and was greeted with an empty bed. I lifted my head and there was no light coming from the bathroom and looking at the clock I saw I had overslept a touch. I usually had my alarm set for seven am, it was now eight-thirty, I was really tempted to put my head back down again but knew I would never get up if I did. Up and into the loo for a pee and a...
Added 24 Apr 2019 | Category Love Stories
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“Ugh” I growled under my breath. During the night Tina had turned over so she was now snuggled, face first, into my chest. This protected her from the dazzling morning sun that was glaring through the bedroom window right into my face. Too late, I was awake and the need to pee was upon me, so I slipped out of bed and put on my robe on the way out of the bedroom. I planned to put the kettle...
Added 19 Apr 2019 | Category Straight Sex
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“Okay. Where we going then?” “Not us, me and the girls.” “Ermm, okay, any reason I’m not invited?” “On a girls’ night out? I think the clue is in the title.” I felt between my legs, looked at Tina and said, “Sorry, dear, my crystals aren’t working properly, you just said ‘we are going out, you and the girls’, no mention of a girls’ night out, I thought you meant our girls. Anyway, I...
Added 16 Apr 2019 | Category Straight Sex
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Sunday morning and we had the house to ourselves. I got up around 7 a.m. and Sally was pottering around downstairs, the kettle was boiling and she had obviously heard me moving about and shouted up asking if I wanted a coffee. Seriously? Do bears shit in the woods? How I actually replied was, “Yes please dear, just grabbing a quick shower.” Five minutes later, showered and with teeth...
Added 10 Feb 2019 | Category Mature
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Scarsdale, New York: Sunday 31st March 2019 Hi, this is Sue. Pete and I have argued long and hard over whether or not we should share the fuller story that he shared in abbreviated form in Chapter 10. I love Pete and understand why he only wanted to share an abbreviated version of my final night with Francis. After all the things that happened that night, Pete just wanted to draw a veil...
Added 02 Apr 2019 | Category Wife Lovers
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